anna91423
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If anyone is interested in hearing me rant passive aggressively through the medium of poetry please read my latest two poems : P
An Exception
A Tall Tale
Any reviews would be greatly appreciated
Arcticus ^ can't help but notice that the two sound similiar to each other
Mar 13, 2014
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Apparently I can be quite productive given a day free from exams....
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Reviews would be hugely appreciated!
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Hi everyone, I posted a short kids story up a few days ago. It's part of a school project and I majorly need to cut it down and make it better, I only got one review on it so any more help would be much appreciated (be as harsh as ypou want- this piece needs help!). Here's the link, work.php?id=98811 Thanks in advance if you do feel like reviewing it.
Just posted a poem too called 'Pixie Dust and Rabbit Holes' if you wanted to read and review something a bit shorter! XD
Cadi Hey Anna! I saw your story, and I have to say, I quite like it! I was going to aim to review it soon, when I next want to avoid some uni work. When do you need it finished for school? I would hate to get around to it just after you've handed it in...
Jan 11, 2013
anna91423 Hi Cadi! Thank you, I'm glad you like it. I've handed the first draft in but I've got until next thursday to redraft, so if you have time to write a review before then that would be great!
Jan 11, 2013
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New Poem up! Been a while since I wrote poetry so I might be a little rusty, anyways here's a link if you feel like reading it: work.php?id=98216
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Thanks for liking my work [url="http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97898"]How to Smile[/url]!
Justagirl *sigh*
Sorry for the mess-up. I meant How to Smile
XD I haven't been on YWS for a few months -- I'm a bit rusty at coding >.<
Nov 12, 2012
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Hate it when you write a first chapter and edit it so you're really happy with it, then get completely stumped of idea for the rest of the story... :L
anna91423 *ideas
Oct 31, 2012
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Okay so I didn't see your review on my poem The Noose, so I'm just getting around to replying today. Apparently, YWS doesn't inform me anymore when someone reviews my work. Anyways, I'm glad you liked the poem. It's one of my favorites. As for more punctuation, I tried putting in more, but a lot of the "sentences" aren't really sentences and I couldn't add more punctuation. The original doesn't have any punctuation (As don't most of my poems) but people are always complaining about it so I figured I'd add it for this poem. Buuuuuuuuuut anyways, thanks for the review!
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Of course! Mine was about an actual guy in my History class No this isn't an issue, and yeah I have awesome friends Your song was must better and flowed smoother and while I'm at it. I don't know when you joined but I've never seen you around so Welcome to Yws!
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Apr 23, 2018