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  • Mageheart
    Apr 23, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.


  • ShakespeareWallah
    Apr 23, 2015

    Happy Birthday, Anna!


  • anna91423
    Mar 17, 2014

    Dum de dum de dum...


  • anna91423
    Mar 11, 2014

    If anyone is interested in hearing me rant passive aggressively through the medium of poetry please read my latest two poems : P

    An Exception

    A Tall Tale

    Any reviews would be greatly appreciated :)


    Arcticus ^ can't help but notice that the two sound similiar to each other
    Mar 13, 2014


  • anna91423
    Jun 3, 2013

    Apparently I can be quite productive given a day free from exams....

    work.php?id=101894

    work.php?id=101895

    Reviews would be hugely appreciated! :P


  • anna91423
    Jan 11, 2013

    Hi everyone, I posted a short kids story up a few days ago. It's part of a school project and I majorly need to cut it down and make it better, I only got one review on it so any more help would be much appreciated (be as harsh as ypou want- this piece needs help!). Here's the link, work.php?id=98811 Thanks in advance if you do feel like reviewing it. :)

    Just posted a poem too called 'Pixie Dust and Rabbit Holes' if you wanted to read and review something a bit shorter! XD


    Cadi Hey Anna! I saw your story, and I have to say, I quite like it! I was going to aim to review it soon, when I next want to avoid some uni work. When do you need it finished for school? I would hate to get around to it just after you've handed it in...
    Jan 11, 2013


    anna91423 Hi Cadi! Thank you, I'm glad you like it. I've handed the first draft in but I've got until next thursday to redraft, so if you have time to write a review before then that would be great! :)
    Jan 11, 2013

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  • anna91423
    Dec 7, 2012

    New Poem up! Been a while since I wrote poetry so I might be a little rusty, anyways here's a link if you feel like reading it: work.php?id=98216 :)


  • Arcticus
    Dec 5, 2012

    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading, hope to see some of your work too. ;)


  • Justagirl
    Nov 12, 2012

    Thanks for liking my work [url="http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97898"]How to Smile[/url]!


    Justagirl *sigh*
    Sorry for the mess-up. I meant How to Smile
    XD I haven't been on YWS for a few months -- I'm a bit rusty at coding >.<

    Nov 12, 2012

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    IlhamAlKhatib
    Nov 12, 2012

    Thank you for liking my stuff :))

  • Hate it when you write a first chapter and edit it so you're really happy with it, then get completely stumped of idea for the rest of the story... :L


    anna91423 *ideas
    Oct 31, 2012


  • ShakespeareWallah
    Oct 25, 2012

    Thanks for liking my story, Anna. Means a lot.


  • 0o0Redrum0o0
    Jun 27, 2012

    Okay so I didn't see your review on my poem The Noose, so I'm just getting around to replying today. Apparently, YWS doesn't inform me anymore when someone reviews my work. Anyways, I'm glad you liked the poem. It's one of my favorites. As for more punctuation, I tried putting in more, but a lot of the "sentences" aren't really sentences and I couldn't add more punctuation. The original doesn't have any punctuation (As don't most of my poems) but people are always complaining about it so I figured I'd add it for this poem. Buuuuuuuuuut anyways, thanks for the review!


  • dasiamari
    Jun 15, 2012

    Hey
    Of course! Mine was about an actual guy in my History class :P No this isn't an issue, and yeah I have awesome friends :P Your song was must better and flowed smoother and while I'm at it. I don't know when you joined but I've never seen you around so Welcome to Yws!

  • Go Team Griffin! :P



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