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Re: June Review Catalogue
Team Griffin XD 1) 2) 3)
Jun 11, 2012 -
Re: Review Teams
Really hope I'm not too late to join in! Question 1 - c Question 2- d an e Question 3- a Question 4- a and j Question 5- d Question ...
Jun 10, 2012 -
Re: Still Kissing.
Kissing. It just happened. I didn’t mean it to. You told me you liked me then my lips were on you. Kissing. Wish I could press rewind. Shouldn’t lead you ...
Jan 19, 2012 -
Re: Watch people.
I really liked this. It was just a list of thoughts about the world, very honest, and nicely put together to make a poem that 'smooth' to read. I love ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Painting the Clouds
I lie on the grass next to you, painting stories with the clouds. I can hear the smile on your face when you laugh out loud. We pass many an ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: Google Knows...
Google knows the height of Everest: a staggering five and a half miles, she knows the members of One Direction: Niall, Zayn, Liam, Louis and Harry Styles. Google knows how ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: The Race
Wheels turning on the road speeding along too fast. Makes me want to ask them, whats the shame in coming last? Overtaking competitors, I see him whizzing past. One glimpse ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: Drowning in the Crowd
My heart thudding to the beat of the song, bodies thriving under strobe lights, a million people screaming lyrics, “Because it’s all about tonight!”. Your arms around my waist, your ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: F*** You Inspiration
Hey Cookie, thanks for the review! I didn't meant to offend anyone with the language in this, I don't usually swear in my poetry and I would never do it ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: F*** You Inspiration
Fuck you Inspiration, I don't want to wait. I'm writing a poem and there'll be no debate! I've stared at the stars by night And the clouds every day but ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Making Snowmen
I really like this poem, very sweet and heart-warming! "Snow is falling lightly, softly landing on shingled rooftops, ornate flakes expanding. And within seconds, there are children small Getting to ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Is it You?
I really, really love this. I particularly like how the lines are all quite short which gives the idea the narrator in panicy and irrational. I love the description of ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Tongues
This poem (as usual for you) is brilliant. I loved how you created so much empathy for the narrator by intergrating some of the insults people were calling him. I ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Sirens in 6/8
This is so simple, yet so absoloutly perfect. I loved the line "No man can live by ink alone" I also loved how you isolated it by making it a ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: passenger seat
This is simply beautiful. The final lines just took my breath away... It just felt so honest. Thats all I have to say. Amazing. :)
Dec 9, 2011
