Hi there,
I've been working on an essay recently and was wondering if you could check it out. You have some amazing work and it would be great if I could get some feedback from you.
-T
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0o0Redrum0o0 Sure, T. I'd be more than happy to give it a look!
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Dec 14, 2015
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Ominous username - I like it!
Reminds me of "The Shining" by Stephen King
0o0Redrum0o0 That's where I got it
Jan 17, 2014
ConverseFireGirl I like your style! Stephen King is just fabulous!
Jan 17, 2014
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Hi, I'm just posting here as a remind that I need to review your lovely poem when I get a chance. Ok, you know what. I will stop occupying your wall with my useless ramble. ^_^
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Of course I can do that! And I didn't think it was bad. I just think that it could be worked on. As for other poems, I can't wait to read what you've got! ^_^ Poetry is a wonderful thing.
0o0Redrum0o0 Haha thanks I love writing poetry. I remember your saying something about a diary entry on the comment. Well, poetry is my diary. My form of one anyways. It's how I express myself.
Oct 1, 2011
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Oh heyyyyy haha I know you >.< I'm gonna steal your name for something. I likes it lots
0o0Redrum0o0 Pshh, noooooooooo. Tis mah name and mine alone lol I'm the creeper in your closet o.O
Sep 2, 2011
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Thanks for reviewing my work, I didn't really take that work seriously, twas my first attempt in writing a lyric, apparently, I suck,I try but I'm not really good with rhymes. Thanks anyways.
0o0Redrum0o0 That's okay. Free verse poems are cool too! Try one of those. :3
Aug 18, 2011
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thanks for the review! I appreciate it! XD MERRY CHRISTMAS! I would send you a gift but I don't have any points left XD
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0o0Redrum0o0 That's where I got the name
Jul 30, 2011
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Thank you so much for both reviews! <333 They brought a real smile to my face.
In Paper Bag, Lise is indeed a part of Anna's subconscious. Anna's full name is Annalise, but everyone calls her Anna. Lise is sort of a...I'm not sure what to call her. A personified voice, I guess, stemming from starvation-related delusions.
As for Sixteen, I wasn't planning on continuing, but you've inspired me to give it a shot!
Once again, thank you so much!
0o0Redrum0o0 So glad I could provide inspiration <33
Jul 27, 2011
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