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  • Okay, first of all, I want to say that this had to be one of the best poems I've ever read. It was truely phenominal. You have real talent, and ...

    Dec 4, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: That Special Week

    That Special Week The horrid smell And cramps that clench the gut. Don't forget the mood swings too! Trapping me in a prison cell. That is what My periods do. ...

    Nov 2, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: The Doppelganger

    First of all, I'd like to just say wow. This was incredible. Absolutely amazing. The imagry just blew me away. Quote: His hair, a dark and devilish plumage, swayed like ...

    Nov 2, 2011


  • I love this poem! I definitely think you should post it on a sign or banner and use it as a protest. I don't recall any grammar errors, and it ...

    Oct 1, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Contradictions

    You seem so wrong. You seem so right. I go along. I try to fight. I love you. I hate you. I miss your smile. I will you away. You ...

    Oct 1, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Tie me up and love me

    First of all, I have to say I love the rhyme scheme here. I know from experience that it's a difficult one to follow through a whole poem. Quote: Let ...

    Oct 1, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Our Love

    This is my first attempt at writing a love poem. Usually, my poems are depressing and about death. Lemme know what ya think! I just want to know That you'll ...

    Aug 25, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: No Ordinary Girl

    Il ike the concept you have here, but I think it needs a little work. Before I go all Grammar Nazi and stuff and ramble on until you want to ...

    Aug 25, 2011

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: Here I Am

    So, I wrote this poem several years ago for a school project when we were reading Out of the Dust . I hope you like it. I stand here now ...

    Aug 18, 2011


  • I have to agree with Jaetwee. The rhyming was very off. Like, you were constantly rhyming one sound, and only a few stanzas had rhyme scheme going, which makes the ...

    Aug 18, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Blank pages

    I loved this poem! It was short, sweet and simple, as well as to the point. I've never really liked the long, elaborate poems. The only thing I would change ...

    Aug 18, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: The Way Out

    Hey there! Great poem, just so you know. I couldn't find any corrections to make (I'm guessing Noelle found them all lol!) I can't put my finger on what I ...

    Aug 12, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Our Every Tear

    Okay, so a lot of people were saying there were too many commas, periods, ect. So I went ahead and erased all of them to see if that would help. ...

    Aug 12, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Hell's Rollercoaster

    Um, can anybody say "EPIC!" This poem was hysterical in a creepy kind of way. I know I chuckled more than once. Haha, "Please don't mind the Hitler 'stache" That ...

    Aug 11, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Falling Like Rain

    This poem is just a follow up on Teardrops From Heaven . I wrote it after being at the viewing for the girl. It starts out as my feelings and ...

    Aug 4, 2011


Your hesitation suggests you are trying to protect my feelings. However, since I have none, I would prefer you to be honest. An artist's growth depends upon accurate feedback.
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