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  • Nothing beats the feeling of tiny paws on your neck after a week of separation from your little hammie <3

  • Apparently, AI has been reading too many romance novels lately because it is desperately trying to find romance in a novel that has 0 true romance in it.


    gruzinkerbell I agree with this a little too much. I try to use c so and five mister it’s in love w me for no reason?
    16 hours ago

  • Edit: I have resecured my spot on Team Tortoise
    Kaia wrote:In yesterday's chaos I forgot to review...we'll see if Team Tortoise will be merciful toward a brainless human being.

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  • alliyah
    Sep 7, 2024

    Great job reviewing this month Kaia! You are on a roll!


    Kaia And at the moment I opened my laptop, popped on YWS to get my Team Tortoise review done for the day. Thank you, alliyah!
    Sep 7, 2024


    alliyah You're welcome!
    Sep 7, 2024

  • In yesterday's chaos I forgot to review...we'll see if Team Tortoise will be merciful toward a brainless human being.

  • Draft 1, Chapter 1, Version 3 done. Whewwwww. That took a long time. Tomorrow starts Draft 2, but since I've got something going, I'm gonna go ahead and start Draft 1 Chapter 2 Version 3. :D

  • Anybody ever ordered food with their YWS name? I'm highly tempted. My real name is too hard to spell and pronounce and somebody I know ordered their food using their TikTok username which was as bizarre as TheOrangeCow and that's what popped up on her receipt XD.


    RangerofIthilien That sounds incredibly tempting to do, at least when I'm alone. Mine is long and complicated to spell too so my YWS name would certainly be simpler.
    Sep 6, 2024


    SkyVibes I’ll order with a different name bcs no one ever pronounces my name right and I end up missing my order
    Sep 6, 2024

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  • New banner. (It was a lot of work even though it looks very simple @_@)

  • Working on novel stuff. *bonus there's a timer in here because I seriously need motivation to write*

    Come and join if you are free :D

    https://kaia.writerfeedpad.com/7

  • And a new countdown begins! 15 daysssss!!

  • Looking for novelists to review for :D Drop the link to a chapter below, and I'll try to review it for you during my adventure with team tortoise.

    Preferable genre: anything dark and realistic :D
    Spoiler! :
    no graphic s*x**l scenes, pls. Thank you :D


    Moonlily profile/Moonlily/portfolio

    I know it's not realstic but I did bring eb up in your review thread a little while back. There are some dark themes in play so it at least fits one of your requests. However, if you don't think it's a good fit no worries!

    Sep 7, 2024


    Kaia Yes, I remember reviewing for you on this novel before. Is there a particular chapter you would like me to look at? @Moonlily
    17 hours ago

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  • Needed a laugh today, so I reviewed a chapter of my novel using AI.
    Here are my thoughts for anyone who is curious...

    And quick disclaimer: I'm not in any way promoting AI reviews. They are illegal on YWS and do not give the proper, individualized feedback that every author deserves. DO NOT USE THEM TO REVIEW SOMEONE ELSE'S WORKS!!

    That said...
    Spoiler! :
    AI review #1
    AI REALLY jumbled the whole first chapter into the foreshadowing of a deep, complicated romance. Sorry to disappoint yah, but my characters are in fact simply close cousins, not romantic lovers, ha. ha. ha.

    AI Review #2
    In a world increasingly dominated by digital connections, the bonds of friendship often take on unexpected forms. Jed and Kassie exemplify this in their quirky, late-night exchanges, where playful banter and heartfelt moments intertwine.
    Okay maybe thisssss time AI understands a little better...

    Jed's struggle with losing yet another game of solitaire symbolizes a larger theme of feeling trapped in a cycle of unproductive habits.

    Good point! I'm surprised you figured that out. Not too bad for an AI review, but lacking serious depth.

    Overall, both reviews were pretty bad. They lacked detail and told me nothing about areas to improve. It was fun to do, but very useless, XD


  • My writing is giving me the creeps again. This is good.


    RavenAkuma Imma say that's a GREAT sign! >:D
    Sep 4, 2024




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