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  • Came up with a new start and finished general outline, after finishing typing my rough draft for the second story.
    Can't give away too much, but it involves a grave digger in the 1900s doing a night shift.

  • Almost done with my second story's rough draft, just need to make a conclusion. Then revise it, which is gonna be a real doozy and a LOT of rewriting for consistency sake. I'll most likely won't be posting a story this month and maybe have the final story next month.

  • So I just had the weirdest dream in my entire life O_O. In the dream, I was watching a movie about Barbie and Ken going on a chaotic ride and the events that transpire, at some point Ken got into a fight and killed a guy then went into the back alley to hide the body. The movie ends with him getting arrested and Barbie ditching him, then threw the engagement ring at him. She basically went "Byeee,"
    It was basically an adult Barbie movie and Barbie Girl song was playing in Ken's car.

  • Writing the second story has be a bit slow due to life, also a book and a game teamed up and is kept me hostage, and when I do feel like writing it's like midnight. I'm hoping I could squeeze in a bit more writing and maybe get it done somewhere in March. I really want to work on my writing more.

  • Making my next short story as three parts, but I won't publish them as separate since that's gonna be a pain, so they're gonna be placed in as one work. I'm really excited about this one, since I had this story in my mind for a while and want to put it on paper. :D


    During the development for my story (The Tragic Case of Nellie Wales) I had to come up with the monster for Nellie, but couldn't figure what it look like in my head and try to translate it on paper. So I had to sketch it out to make it easier for myself in describing the creature. I will admit it was fun to draw out, especially when it comes to the hair.
    Here's what I drew. It's not the greatest, but more of a reference to get the idea down.


  • Hi! Welcome to YWS :)

    RokitaVivi Thank you so much 😀
    Feb 2, 2023

  • I find it funny that editing, especially if it's multiple times takes longer than writing the whole story. That could be just me, but it certainly feels like it.

    Ari11 Definitely. Editing is pain. That's why I just start over...and have been working on the same story for 4 years now.
    Feb 1, 2023

    RokitaVivi Jiminy Crickets, 4 years on the same story :O!? I feel your torment, so pain X(.
    Feb 1, 2023

  • Hello! :) Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS, hope you're enjoying the site so far.


    RokitaVivi Thank you!

    So far I'm enjoying my time here :D

    Jan 27, 2023

  • Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Mage. If you have any questions about YWS, let me know!

    (And if I'm ever not online, junior moderators, global moderators and admins definitely would be able to help you out with any questions or concerns you have. Other YWSers would be happy to help you as well!)

    Before you get settled in, you might want to swing by the rules thread to see what's allowed on the site, and the FAQ thread to figure out how the site works. It explains a lot about the basics of the site, like how to post your works and how to get points. It was really useful to me back when I first joined the site, so hopefully it'll be just as useful for you! :)

    Some fun areas of the site you might want to learn more about are the forums, blogs and Roleplay Section. The forums have fun games, writing activities, and places to talk about whatever writing project you're working on. The blogs aren't used as much as the other sections of the site, but you can post little life updates there. And the Roleplay Section is a place to collaborate on stories—either by roleplaying or co-writing novel-style stories.

    I hope you enjoy your time on YWS!

  • Hello there! Welcome to YWS!!

    RokitaVivi Thank you, it's lovely being here.
    Jan 20, 2023

    KateHardy :)
    Jan 20, 2023

  • Welcome to YWS! It's great to have you here!

    RokitaVivi Thank you it's nice to be here, and maybe get to improve my writing along the way.
    Jan 20, 2023

    Ari11 ^-^
    Jan 20, 2023

you know how those like hummingbird things have those fast wingy thingies? And like the heartbeats. The heartbeats are so fast. So like, do humminbribs like sense time fast too? like berry alen or smh? I BET THEY DO! BIRBFLASHHHHHHHH!
— Dr. Mr. Elfboy