distantdreamer21
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distantdreamer21 Thanks! I love Bieber <3
Jun 23, 2011
jolene15 Me 2 im a huge fan
Jun 23, 2011
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Hey there! I saw you left a comment on my poem "Her Name is Peace"! For your question as to what heather is, its basically like a ground-covering shrub with lots of tiny purple flowers that usually grow in meadows. I wanted something like field, but that unfortunately doesn't rhyme with feather! I also have a question for you: what exactly don't you understand exactly about the "calling her at our best" part? I wanted to make it as if society will demand peace only when it is ready for it (at their best), and the "give her a chance" part is an allusion to John Lennon's song, "Give Peace a Chance" (I thought this way it would tie into the title). Is there a way for me to make my intent clearer?
distantdreamer21 Hey Cassandra! Thanks for following up on my comments! The heather piece is a lot clearer now that you told me what it is!
For other readers who do not know of it, I believe it is a little more complex.
Concerning the "calling at her best" part, I would maybe mention the famous quote by Bob Marley said when the power of love overcomes the power of hate, the world will know peace of something of that sort.
The John Lennon allusion is great! Like I stated above, I think it was just difficult to automatically know that while reading and could be a little confusing to readers who haven't heard of the song.
I would suggest maybe a footnote at the bottom or even the top of your work to state what the intent of your poem is.. That way when the reader comes across the heather section or the "Give peace a chance" allusion, they can understand your work more clearly.
Thanks again for filling me in, I understand your poem much better!
Keep on writing!
-Dreamer
Jun 19, 2011
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Today is a very sad day indeed... final day of the glorious writing camp!
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distantdreamer21 Hey Snoink!:)
Jun 16, 2011
Snoink How's it going?
Jun 17, 2011
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distantdreamer21 You're welcome! Keep up the good work.
-Dreamer
Jun 16, 2011
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Hello and welcome to the Young Writers Society! You are going to love it here
If you have any questions feel free to PM me or any of the other members. We can help you with anything. If you haven't already, you should go introduce yourself in Chat(link found on the main page) or the welcome discussion in the lounge, found in "All Community Forums).
If you have any questions, just let me know!
Love always,
Ktg
P.S. What do you usually like to write? Or do you like Art/ Photography?
distantdreamer21 Hey! Thank you for the warm welcome! I am very excited to be apart of a great writing community such as this.
I actually enjoy writing a variety of genres! I tend to write more poetry and opinion articles on topics big in the world today.
-- As for art and photography, I like them as well.
Jun 16, 2011
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Ktg17 So jealous
Jun 16, 2011
distantdreamer21 It's fantastic!
Jun 16, 2011
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distantdreamer21 Hey Friend!
Jun 16, 2011
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