distantdreamer21

Firstly, I would like to commend you on writing a true, moving piece. I believe it fits the era we live in today with cyber-bullying and how it rages like ...

This is very interesting! I as well loved the book Catcher and the Rye... As Sara stated, I am going to try writing something like this as well I think! ...

Hey! I would just like to start off by saying you have a great topic for this piece! A long distance relationship is not only hard to conquer for the ...

Hey! I agree with Sare, you have a very promising piece here, If you remove some of the grammatical errors. Am I going against fate and destiny, because I cant ...

Hey Alliaaryn! I'm distantdreamer but you can call me dreamer for short. I enjoy the main point you are trying to make here however; there are a few things I ...

This poem was literally outstanding. I felt your pain throughout the piece. It is remarkable of how much strengh she believed she had. Her tragic ending really made a impact ...

Hey! Im Dreamer, this is a great poem you have here, I just have a couple critiques i'd like to make. Key: Blue: Changes Red: What I Like Purple: Comments ...

Banned for not possessing Quote "Swagger".

This quote is fantastic. The line where you mention that you have to "remember to exhale" evokes understanding from the reader that this is a huge step you are about ...

I am a new member on the YWS site as well! I am very excited to be apart of this writing community and cannot wait to share my pieces with ...

He opened his bronze urn, the home in which your soul would remain, and sucked up the life you had left. I absolutely adored what you wrote here. I feel ...

Hello! I thought your poem was interesting! However; being in high school myself, I had a hard time relating 100% to what you were describing. The part where you mention ...

I loved your poem! It totally relates to society today and what young girls perceive as "good style." The only part that I had a hard time understanding was the ...