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  • Thanks for the review, WhiteWolf! (:


    WhiteWolf Anytime, and good luck writing!
    Apr 17, 2011


    GeeLyria THanks! You too! :D
    Apr 17, 2011


  • Haylie
    Apr 17, 2011

    Thankyou for the review (: x


    WhiteWolf No problem and have fun writing
    Apr 17, 2011

  • Thank you for joining my club, and welcome to young writers!!! I am going to follow you!!!


    WhiteWolf Haha just joining the ones that interest me and thanks!
    Apr 17, 2011


  • Razcoon
    Apr 16, 2011

    Welcome to the site! I am someone's first post. Such an honor. xD Anyway, just wanted to let you know that when you review, capitalization is appreciated. So is spacing out paragraphs and using proper grammar. I appreciate your feedback though, and look forward to reading your work in the future. If you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask!

    Spoiler! :
    In response to the question about the rain, I answered why it comforts her in the story - she meditates in it. Why she LIKES it...no specific reason. I like the rain too. The only thing I didn't really add was a background story, and that was due to the fact that most things leading up to something like this would probably be cliche. I plan on adding a background story in the near future.


    WhiteWolf Okay sorry next time I will look out for that stuff and thanks for being my first post! Also thanks if i need help I will be sure to ask
    Apr 17, 2011



Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
— RazorSharpPencil