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  • Carlito
    May 11, 2016

    Congrats on your third star!! Keep it up! :D

  • I need internet friends


    EverStorm hi I am internet friend
    May 11, 2016


  • PaperNessa
    Jun 15, 2015

    A TIME TO PRETEND is up and ready for some hot reviews, if anyone is interested.


  • Benrobertringrose
    Jun 14, 2015

    Hello,

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on 'The dead lady in the kitchen'. Your insightful comments and kind words mean a great deal. In particular, your feedback regarding the similarities in names is excellent, and reflecting back on the story I totally see what you mean!

    If you ever want me to critique your work please don't hesitate to ask!

    Regards,
    Ben


    PaperNessa Anytime! I really appreciate the thank you for the review!
    Jun 14, 2015


  • sharoze
    Mar 22, 2015

    Hi, I was wondering if you would like to review a poem I wrote?


  • PaperNessa
    Mar 15, 2015

    I'm being moderated for cursing. Sounds about right.


  • PaperNessa
    Feb 23, 2015

    I just think the comments on my work "Love in a Glorious Pyre" are funny because the words that some of the readers don't understand are words I literally learned from my HIGH SCHOOL JUNIOR LEVEL SAT vocabulary list. There's a difference between the reader being a thirteen-year old with preliminary poetic device techniques and a twenty-five year old with a limited vocabulary.


  • PaperNessa
    Feb 23, 2015

    There's a difference between the narrator trying to sound "too smart" and the audience's inability to understand


  • PaperNessa
    Feb 18, 2015

    Why would anyone suggest to a poet to use simplier language? Why?


    Willard It's a valid critique.
    Feb 19, 2015


    Vervain Well, most people would suggest a poet use simpler* language when it's obvious they're stretching their vocabulary for the sake of nothing but using big words, or if they miss out on the nuances of the words they use in their fervor for syllabic impression. Complex language isn't automatically good, and simple language isn't automatically bad—especially when it comes to art forms such as poetry, where every little meaning counts immensely towards the finished work.
    Feb 24, 2015


  • PaperNessa
    Jan 18, 2015

    The amount of works I have on private are unreal.


  • PaperNessa
    Jan 18, 2015

    Are chat rooms a thing?

  • Crazy I've been here since 2011.


  • PaperNessa
    Jan 8, 2015

    I finally wrote something again. It's up in my unsorted and named "Fire Poker".


  • PaperNessa
    May 25, 2013

    I've been too busy to write all year... but I feel like it's starting to slowly come back to me. Very slowly. But that's okay.

  • Thank you very much Nessa for your kind words on my poem! I guess it's only depressing to me because I'm the only one who knows what it's about. Anyways thanks for your review and if you ever need a review let me know :smt032



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