Rodionandaxe
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118,075 Literary Works • 639,196 Reviews
Aug 3, 2021
(i wrote 2 just in case, one of them is up for judging, so I guess i will just put this here)
perhaps for the better, say?
To dream the faceless
and wake to sweating passions,
in search of what could have been.
When the wind, it howls
and the clouds, they cry in pain,
my wounds bleed afresh
by thoughts of past and present.
What was and what could have been.
does it need anymore commas