rida has been a member of the Young Writers Society since Feb 24 2020. They have made 237 posts and 47 reviews. Please take the time to welcome them to YWS!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
