Rawwrr (Reopened!)

Wolferion

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Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:23 am

Wolferion says... · Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:23 am

Ohayou mina! (Hiya everybody!)
Welcome to my reopened WRFF stall =)

What I can offer anybody looking for a review is an honest review, which might as well be harsh. I review pretty much anything except fan-fiction (Because I might lack related knowledge and that would affect the quality). When reviewing I focus more on the impression the story gives than the grammar, however, I do correct grammar and sentence build. So you might know better how I truly review, I'd like you to read at least one of my the most recent reviews.

(Ever since the new web page system, the old links and not usable - I'll add new links upon reviewing)
Unfading Chapter 1 by ScarlettFire
Falling Flame by Angelreader77

I'm pretty much a critic, so if you can't stand honest criticism much, please don't ask - it might disgust you. If you're looking for an honest opinion and want to improve no matter the truth - I'm happy to help.

Best regards,
~Kyousuke

Last edited by Wolferion on Sun Feb 12, 2012 12:31 pm, edited 5 times in total.

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Twit

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Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:41 am

Twit says... · Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:41 am

I definitely need harsh and honest on this. That's a link to the story's page because it's easier to give one link than three and there's three chapters up at the moment, and if you could do all three I'd be supremely grateful, though if you don't have time, just one will be fine. ^_^

"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir

Wolferion

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Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:06 pm

Wolferion says... · Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:06 pm

All 3 done.

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

mikepyro

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Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:22 pm

mikepyro says... · Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:22 pm

I would very much enjoy a review over my animal novel. The work is complete so whatever ch is fine, even just the first. If you'd prefer reviewing a short story instead my story The Charlie or The Yellow Sheets are among my better works I'm most interested in reviews from. Sheets is more storyline and Charlie is more dialogue and prose styled.

I'd be glad to return a favor to a work of your own, though I'm also honest as well

Phoenix23

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Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:37 am

Phoenix23 says... · Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:37 am

Hello ShinDa,

. I think its time for some honest criticism. Will you please review my poem? Here is the link:
viewtopic.php?t=88127.

If you are a dreamer, come in,
If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,
A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire
For we have some flax-golden tales to spin.
Come in!
Come in!
- Shel Silverstein

Wolferion

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Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:04 am

Wolferion says... · Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:04 am

Forgot to mention all's done =)

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
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Wolferion

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Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:51 pm

Wolferion says... · Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:51 pm

Oi, it's about time this was reopened! =) Up and running, ask for a review if you feel like it!

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

Jas

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Mon Feb 06, 2012 3:20 am

Jas says... · Mon Feb 06, 2012 3:20 am

work.php?id=93230

That please! :]

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Wolferion

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Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:01 am

Wolferion says... · Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:01 am

Done! =)

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda