If I Must Die

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Kagi
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Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm
Kagi says... · Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm
Wow this poem really flowed quite well. It had momentum.
I really enjoyed reading it, it had rythme and your word choic was excellent.
I had no nit picks it was all superb!!
You have raw talent.. thoroughly enjoyed
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Wed Dec 08, 2010 5:07 am
laurawillrock says... · Wed Dec 08, 2010 5:07 am
It was great. You did a good job with imagery and i really felt the pain. You put together a good peice of work and i mean that in a good way.
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:26 am
Emmzziee says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:26 am
I love poems that rhyme, and this one has perfect imagery too...
I really liked it :) xxx
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I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson