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If I Must Die

Warrior Princess · 2010-11-08T23:52:59Z

If I must die, then let me die Soaring upward toward the sky; And at the zenith of my flight, Cross from darkness into light. If I must go, then let me go In the gentle hush of falling snow, Kissed by winter's subtle chill, Becoming silence, soft and still. If I must pass, then let me pass In a field of whispering grass, When harvest time has just begun, And fade into the golden sun. If I must end, then let me end With my face turned toward the wild wind, Asleep in the arms of the lonely sea; And so let me enter eternity.

Kagi

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Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm

Kagi says... · Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm

Wow this poem really flowed quite well. It had momentum.
I really enjoyed reading it, it had rythme and your word choic was excellent.
I had no nit picks it was all superb!!
You have raw talent.. thoroughly enjoyed
Kaka x

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