I think you really need to resize the picture; it stretches out of my browser. You can get the how-to over here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59687.html It would make it so much easier to review.
Okay so onto the picture:
1.I love the concept. Very very good. 2.Good angles. 3.You haven't focused very well, though. 4.It would be better if you reduced the amount of the door in the picture. 5
Good work. You obviously have an eye for things. Keep clicking! ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
Hey Kat. I couldn't see the picture and make out it's beauty. While I am writing thsi I even don't know what it's about. Lava's right, you need to resize it. Then only one can give a review.
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
I rated 'like'. So, yea maybe putting it on paint and resizing it would def help. Can't wait to review! :] ~Skyy.
Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd
Please do that then, and I shall critique this once I can see it all at once and it doesn't stretch out my browser. By the way, I skimmed through the photo and it doesn't look too bad! I can't wait to critique it.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
I set this as my background so I could see the whole picture, very good! I love the colours, the angles - but I feel it would look better with more door above the knob. It's awesome how the panel-thing of the door gets wider, and how the light is set off the handcuffs. I don't really get the name. But you do have quite an eye! So please, please keep snapping away!
~Durrs
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By the way, I skimmed through the photo and it doesn't look too bad! I can't wait to critique it.
