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Last edited by Kat Jackson on Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:58 am, edited 3 times in total.




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Hi Kat!

I think you really need to resize the picture; it stretches out of my browser. You can get the how-to over here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59687.html
It would make it so much easier to review.

Okay so onto the picture:

1.I love the concept. Very very good. :)
2.Good angles.
3.You haven't focused very well, though.
4.It would be better if you reduced the amount of the door in the picture.
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Good work. You obviously have an eye for things. Keep clicking!
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Hey Kat. I couldn't see the picture and make out it's beauty. While I am writing thsi I even don't know what it's about. Lava's right, you need to resize it. Then only one can give a review.
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I rated 'like'. So, yea maybe putting it on paint and resizing it would def help. Can't wait to review! :]
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Yes, I am aware. I'm very sorry, I completely forgot about resizing it.




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Please do that then, and I shall critique this once I can see it all at once and it doesn't stretch out my browser. ;) By the way, I skimmed through the photo and it doesn't look too bad! I can't wait to critique it.

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Thank you, so far. Haha. ^-^




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I set this as my background so I could see the whole picture, very good! I love the colours, the angles - but I feel it would look better with more door above the knob. It's awesome how the panel-thing of the door gets wider, and how the light is set off the handcuffs. I don't really get the name. But you do have quite an eye! So please, please keep snapping away!

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