Hi, Mizz! Okay I love the picture. I'm not sure if you edited it to be like that or if it was the way you shot it but I like the colors. They seem darker. My only problem with it is the letters are a little hard to read. I had to squint and try to make out that it said still, I couldn't see the "s". Maybe make those a little bit bigger. I love the font though. Hope that helps. ~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you. ~And The Light Fades
The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do. ~Away From What We Started
Thanks, S'getti! Actually, I down-sized it to fit on this forum, which is probably why it's harder to read. It was originally made as a larger size to use as a wallpaper. Thanks for the tips, though! xxx Mizz
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery, Because after all, those wings will take you up so high." -- Owl City, "To the Sky" ✯ ✯ ✯
Hey, Lily is here by will of her psychic powers. I think you have a lovely image idea but it feels like you really added a lot of contrast and brightness to the picture. That’s not a bad thing. I do that to a lot of my pictures, but sometimes it draws out the life of a picture. If this is what you did, the only issue with that is that the reflection of light on the water is very bright which makes certain letters a little harder to read like the 'b' in 'but’ and the 'd’ in ‘tried’ so be careful when you edit pictures.
I just noticed, too, that the blue of the flowers is very pretty. But I didn't really notice it until about the forth glance at the picture and I think that’s because they’re directly in the middle of image. Nudging it over even a smidge would make this beautiful blue color really stand out Still a very pretty image and wallpaper!
~lilymoore
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Thanks for the review, psychic-lady. XD. About the contrast & brightness; I actually didn't edit this picture too much, lol, and it actually is very easy to read if it's in the wallpaper size, trust me! Oh, and about the centering, I agree. I couldn't really move side to side though because it was a koi pond and fish were right on the edge of the frame for this picture. I actually had to crop them out, lol. But I see what you mean; it would have looked nicer that way. Thanks a lot!
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery, Because after all, those wings will take you up so high." -- Owl City, "To the Sky" ✯ ✯ ✯
I love this picture! The lighting and clarity you have going on is great, as is the contrast. The reflections in the water are nice, and I like how it's slightly blurry further back, as it really helps to draw the focus to the lilies. The photo itself looks professionally done. It's simply wonderful. Great job! ^^
My only complaints about the whole piece itself is the text. For one, like peanut said, the quote is rather hard to read because it's so small. I realize that you probably downsized so that it fit nicely in the forum, but I think it could be made a little bit larger, even on the full-size picture. Also, you have three different fonts, which is a little bit distracting. And they don't really seem like they fit together very well, in relation to the picture. The first font you have in the top left corner fits the best. The quote reminds me of a ransom note, and I don't think that's the effect you're looking for here. The bottom font is too bland. I'd suggest making all the text one font, or at least the quote and the source the same. The (c)2010 irishflames can stand alone as a separate font because it's not actually a part of the picture itself, you know? But I definitely think that you should change the font of the other two to the same thing, and it will help to pull the piece together.
Hope that helped! I really do like this, especially the photo!
-May
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.
Thanks! The quote is from my favorite song, I was just throwing things around. It makes more sense when you listen to the song, lol. I probably will end up changing that, though, now that you mentioned it. Also, thanks for the tips about the text. I was partially trying out the new texts, seeing as I downloaded a bajillion free texts today. XD. Well, thanks!
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery, Because after all, those wings will take you up so high." -- Owl City, "To the Sky" ✯ ✯ ✯
hEllOw, MizzLe. I haven't talk to you in a while! Aww... I love this photo is beautiful! The quote is beautiful, but I think that the Font wasn't the most appropriate! Maybe it should be something more delicate! But anyway it looks good! *Sol waves at Mizzle* -Sol
Noob is a state of being, not a length of time. ~Ego
"Serás del tamaño de tus pensamientos; no te permitas fracasar."
I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it. — soundofmind
