Rain's Reviews

Raindeer · 2018-11-12T06:18:40Z

Rain's Reviews Hello! Welcome. I'm trying to get to my next review star (a blue one!!), as well as get into the habit of reviewing more. Help me out :D Please read below before requesting a review! What My Reviews Are Like I usually don't focus too much on grammar (unless it's a big issue, and then I'll just point it out) and instead focus more on plot, characters, dialogue, writing style, pacing, and all that good stuff. I will say what I liked and what I thought you did well, but I will also point out what I think needs improvement. If there's anything in particular you want me to review on, let me know. Lengthwise, it varies. What I Will Review Novels . I will review prologues, first chapters, middle chapters, and last chapters! If I'm reviewing a chapter in a novel where I haven't read the previous chapter, I will focus on things pertaining to solely that chapter (usually little plot holes, dialogue, etc etc). Short Stories . Yes! I love short stories. Screenplays, Essays, Other . I haven't had much experience with these but I'd love to! I'll review all genres. :) What I Won't Review Poetry . Sorry! I have a deep appreciation for poetry and I love reading it, but in most cases I really don't know how to help! There are a lot of other people that accept poetry reviews, though, so I would recommend checking those out. Prose is more my thing. :) Nothing too gory please! Requesting a Review To request a review, please put a link below! If it's a novel chapter that's midway through the book, a basic summary of what's happened (only a few sentences or so) would be nice, but it's not necessary. Please only request one review at a time just so I don't get overpowered with reviews. I don't require any payment for a review! Finally, I reserve the right to refuse a request! Most likely won't do this, but just in case I'm not comfortable doing a review I'll simply tell you so.

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Tue Mar 17, 2020 1:45 pm

4revgreen says... · Tue Mar 17, 2020 1:45 pm

Hey, I hope you're still accepting :-)

I'd really appreciate some reviews on some chapters of my ongoing novel "The sticks"
I have had a few on chapters 1-3 so you don't need to review them, but you may need to just quickly skim them to get an idea of the storyline. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/4revgreen/The-Sticks-Chapter-Four--REVISED-146716
That's the link to chapter 4. :-)

Thank you for your time!

“The sight of one's own heart is degrading; people are not meant to look inward--that's why they've been give bodies, to hide their souls.”

― Shirley Jackson, The Sundial

Raindeer

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Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:19 pm

Raindeer says... · Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:19 pm

@4revgreen totally still open! I’ll get to this later!:)

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Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:26 pm

4revgreen says... · Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:26 pm

Thank you

“The sight of one's own heart is degrading; people are not meant to look inward--that's why they've been give bodies, to hide their souls.”

― Shirley Jackson, The Sundial

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Thu Apr 09, 2020 6:26 pm

Hijinks says... · Thu Apr 09, 2020 6:26 pm

Hello!

If you're still accepting requests, I'd love it if you'd review the first chapter of my book.

Frieda Aflister, Chapter 1

It's rated 16+ for mild language, but there's no f-bombs, just, well, milder stuff.

Be as harsh as you like, I love constructive criticism.

Anyways, thanks for considering!

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Fri Apr 10, 2020 12:56 am

Raindeer says... · Fri Apr 10, 2020 12:56 am

@whatchamacallit Thanks for requesting! I’ll get to it soon

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Fri Apr 10, 2020 1:08 am

Hijinks says... · Fri Apr 10, 2020 1:08 am

Thanks!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Fri Jun 12, 2020 11:58 am

ChrisCalaid says... · Fri Jun 12, 2020 11:58 am

Can you please review my short stories?

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Fri Jun 12, 2020 5:45 pm

Raindeer says... · Fri Jun 12, 2020 5:45 pm

@ChrisDixon I'll do these today and tomorrow for Team Tortoise!

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Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:44 pm

kaitlyn says... · Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:44 pm

HI Rain!!

If you're still accepting requests, I'd love it if you'd review the next chapter of my book. I think you've heard of it. :wink:

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.2

Thanks in advance

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Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:13 pm

Raindeer says... · Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:13 pm

@HarryHardy I definitely will! I'll try and get to it today/tonight.

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Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:38 pm

kaitlyn says... · Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:38 pm

HI Rain!!

I'm back. I'd love it if you could review the next chapter of my book.

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.3
Thanks in advance

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Thu Aug 06, 2020 1:53 pm

kaitlyn says... · Thu Aug 06, 2020 1:53 pm

HI Rain!!

I'm back ~~again~~. I'd love it if you could review the next chapter of my book.

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 5

Thanks in advance

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Thu Aug 06, 2020 10:12 pm

Raindeer says... · Thu Aug 06, 2020 10:12 pm

@HarryHardy you got it! I’ll get to it soon

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Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:37 pm

canopy says... · Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:37 pm

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