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The Shoe Inspector

Kaia · 2023-08-01T16:32:52Z

Welcome to the Shoe Inspector! I look for little defects in your shoes that may cause you to trip up later. What I look at: I review all types of shoes with with any tag rating. My specialties are in the area of novels and short stories, but I will try my hand at anything. Disclaimer: I will try anything, but there is a minute chance that I may get triggered by something and have to quit. Upon such an unfortunate event, you will be PMed an apology message. What I look for: PLOT 1. Trailing shoelaces-when the pace drags just a little too much 2. Cracks-when the plot/pace is a little disconnected and choppy 3. Soleless shoes-when the pace is rushed a bit too much and the main part is left behind DETAILS 1. Unpolished surfaces-when the piece could use a little editing and basic touchup. 2. Unmatching shoelaces-when a few inconsistencies ruin the overall effect 3. Leaks-when the phrasing gets a bit off and Grammer mistakes slip in through the holes What a review includes: You may order either a general review or a specialized review. GENERALIZED REVIEW A generalized review will look for all the issues mentioned above, and go through solutions with you. It also comes with high praise for the places you did wonderfully on. SPECIALIZED REVIEW A specialized review grants you the freedom to pick and chose what parts you want criticism on and which parts you don't. When I review, I will pay special attention to any issues you bring up. All reviews are free and will come with positivity, I promise.:) Thank you for visiting your local Shoe Inspector!

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Sun Oct 13, 2024 2:01 am

Kaia says... · Sun Oct 13, 2024 2:01 am

Absolutely would love to! I'll try to get to it this week! Thanks for dropping by! @WinnyWriter

Kaia
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Fri Jul 10, 2026 2:04 pm

canopy says... · Fri Jul 10, 2026 2:04 pm

Hello there! I am canopy a Res & Comm crew mod and I have marked your thread as closed as it hasn't been active in the last 12 months! Should you ever want to reopen your thread again you can edit your post as mark it as "Accepting".

Please feel free to reach out should you have any questions or concerns!

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