Ehehehe, I'm super duper nervous but, if you'd like, you can review my first chapter and beyond of Eclipse? I've gotten some reviews on it already but the more feedback I get, the greater I can determine if I should continue pursuing the idea.
You're probably going to see a lot...and I mean a lot of grammatical errors. I'm not too worried about those at the moment, because I can always find a few good editors to polish it up. It's the meat of the story I'm mostly worried about. No point in roasting a turkey to perfection if it's not even good turkey meat.
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