The YWS Critique Sandwich

Tgis seems like a good way to write reviews.

Thanks @Nate for this.

I would like to submit a dessert choice to add to this information on The YWS Critique Sandwich. I present... The YWS'more. The Sandwich will always be a great tool for the ages, but sometimes it's fun to mix it up a bit!

First, the Graham Cracker -> The firm place to hold - steady your review by starting with an interpretation and with your overall impressions.

Second, we have the Toasted, but Slightly Burned Marshmallow -> Find the Crispy Edges! Share some specific criticism or where there is room for improvement. (ie. don't scorch this side quite so much next time!)

Next we have the delicious, cheery, joyful section - many people's favorite - The Melty Hershey's Chocolate Bar -> Find the Sweet Parts! Compliments and praise! Share what you loved about the work, and what made it shine! Remember just like a good s'more is going to have a healthy dose of marshmallow and chocolate a good review is just not complete without these.

And lastly, Graham Cracker -> Close up those loose ends! This is where the s'more ends - final questions of clarification, thoughts you wanted to get in, maybe a cute sign-off and signature Review Banner. This definitely shouldn't be the bulk of the review since the Graham Crackers aren't really the highlight of the s'more but they do hold all the goodness together!



Here's a Review Template if you need some help getting started! (Replace the text in the parenthesis with your own words)

REVIEW TEMPLATE

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Hi there! I'm reviewing using the [url=https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=153&t=57651&start=15#p1460770]YWS S'more Method[/url] today!

(GREETING & INTRODUCTION)

[b]Top Graham Cracker[/b] - What I Know
(CONTENT - my impressions / interpretation)

[b]Slightly Burnt Marshmallow[/b] - Room for Improvements
(CONTENT - include specific suggestions)

[b]Chocolate Bar[/b] - Highlights of the Piece
(CONTENT - include specific praises)

[b]Closing Graham Cracker[/b] - Closing Thoughts
(CONTENT & SIGN-OFF)

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LEFT BY BUG

(clue 2/3)

You found something sweet that bugs like to eat!
But do you know where else we love to meet?
Anywhere there's jam and poetry!
Find your next next clue, in the poetry jam club,
look for the link posted by a feathered one.
- FROM QUEENBUG

Ths seems like an amazing way how to improve rewiews! I would love to try it someday, bet it wil worsk great.

Oy, I'm impishly delighted by the S'More Method. Huzzah to it!

The s'more method has been working so well for me in my recent reviews. Thanks so much for making it! <333

Guidance can never be overemphasized!