Event 7: Green Room Review Challenge

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Green Room Review Challenge

Summary:
Write the best review you can write! Many times, reviewers get wrapped up in writing lots and lots of reviews, and sometimes they forget what's most important: helping the author. And the most important thing to focus on when writing a review is the quality, not the quantity.
This event is all about writing quality reviews!

Description:
The goal of this event is to write quality reviews, not necessarily long reviews. Unless it's way too short, length will not be considered when judging. Grammar and spelling will also not be considered.

Some things to help you on your way:
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Try to hit on some of these points when reviewing! Also, even if you don't know how to fix something, it's still helpful to point out things to the writer!

Novel/short story:
~ Characters - are they believable? Boring? How do they fit the story?
~ Plot - Does it make sense? Do the characters fit with it?
~ Pacing - Does it feel too fast? Too slow?
~ Setting - Do you know where it's taking place? Does it make sense compared to the rest of the story?
~ Dialogue - Does it fit the characters? Is it clear? Is it dull and seems to drag on forever?

Poetry/lyrics:
~ Flow - How does everything come together? Did you get stuck anywhere?
~ Imagery and figurative language - Can you picture what's being described? Does it fit the theme of the work?
~ Clarity - Does everything make sense? Did something seem off?
~ Emotion - What did you feel when reading this? Was it the emotion you expected to feel? Does it fit?

These are a few of the things that can help a review be helpful to the author, but there is much more! Also, you don't have to and shouldn't hit all of these points! 2 or 3 is helpful, and more than that can be too much to focus on.

Rules:
1. You must write a review on a work in the green room.
2. No ai reviews (site rule in general... so don't do it)
3. The review has to have been written within the time the event is up. You cannot submit a review you've written in the past.

How to Enter:
Post below in the thread with a link to your review!
You may change your submission any amount of times by editing your post up until the deadline. I will only judge 1 review per contestant!

Questions:
If you have a question, feel free to ask below, PM me, or drop a message on my wall!

Ends:
08/11/2024 00:00 GMT (automatically adjusted to your time zone)
If for some reason you cannot submit by the due date, please PM me to tell me why and we might be able to figure something out!

Most importantly, have fun!!
If you ever want to talk, please feel free to PM me for any reason! ^^
Don't write because you're a writer; write because you have something to say.
Orabella ~ Ora ~ Avenue ~ Aven
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Here is my review!

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Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?

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Haven't been doing a tone of reviews lately, and I'm experimenting with a new tactic on top of it ':D

But I got this one up today! --> work/Avian/Flightless-Chapter-6-158409?c=757135#c757135
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Here's my review!

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My review for Friendly Fiends!
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My review. Team Feathered Friends. work/EllieMae/Babysitting-Little-Me-158626#c757138
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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Hello! You? Yes you reading this. Have a nice day because you're wonderful and you deserve it!

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Thank you all for participating!! The results will hopefully be out in a few days. :D
If you ever want to talk, please feel free to PM me for any reason! ^^
Don't write because you're a writer; write because you have something to say.
Orabella ~ Ora ~ Avenue ~ Aven
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien