Gengar Does Reviews!

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Howdy hey! Gengar here! Do you want someone to review your work? Most likely, since you clicked on this thread. I wanna try to improve my reviewing skills, and what better way to do that than reviewing stuff?

What are my reviews like?

My reviews are usually more commentary based. I usually try to break it up into three sections: things I like, my interpretation of the work, and things I think could be improved on. My reviews are usually kind of short, but I’m going to try to make them a little longer for this.

I will review:

—Short stories
—Poems
—All genres (although I may not be as good with romance stories)
—pretty much anything not in the list below

I Won’t review

—Novels/chapters (unless it’s the first chapter)
—Fanfiction (unless I know the fandom)
—Really, really long stories
—articles/essays
—18+ works, or works with graphic violence / gore

I’m not looking for anything in return. Please keep in mind that I may not review stuff immediately.
Last edited by GengarTheGhost on Fri Mar 22, 2024 7:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hi there Gengar! I noticed you were looking for reviews, so I thought I might as well drop by, as I actually have something for once in need of review.

I just wrote this poem here and was hoping for some critique on it.

Thanks!
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Hey! If you wish to review something, I have a poem I recently published here:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/FireCrispyWriting/Id-Like-to-Speak-to-the-Writer-of-My-Life-157497




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Sure thing! I’ll get it done soon :D
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Hey Gengar!
I really, really need input on my writing (since I'm kind of a newbie). I only wrote one poem, and it would be great if you could tell me what you think about it. By the way, I am all for constructive criticism, and take everything with a grain of salt, in other words, you can insult my writing if necessary. Thanks in advance!
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@Inferno hey inferno! I'm not sure if you saw the closed tag on this thread, but I'm not currently looking for reviews bc I'm kinda busy with life. If I have the time I may do it but if you might wanna check with other YWSers first. I hope you understand <333
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OH MY GOSH! I'm sorry! Yes, I understand. Sorry sorry sorry! I didn't see the closed thingy. SO Sorry.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off. Sorry for the inconvenience.


WAIT.
Spoiler
theydon'tloveyoulikeiloveyou-



Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
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