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Hello! I've got a hankering for some delicious prose, so let's help each other out! XD

FYI:
    Only post one piece/chapter at a time (exception- poem collections)
    For a novel/novella, if you'd like me to review for content/plot please begin with first chapter
    All ratings are acceptable
    Specify review type wanted

Yea:

    all poetry
    lyrics
    short stories and novels/novellas (one chapter at a time)
    Genres: Adventure/Fantasy/Sci-fi/Romance/Realism/General
    photography

Nay:
    scripts
    articles/essays/reviews
    non-fiction/historical
    fanfiction
    advanced crits

Review Types:
  1. Standard (grammar and content focus)
  2. Grammar/Technical Focus (nut and bolts of writing and technique)
  3. Content Focus (plot, character analysis and overall style)
  4. Intensive Standard (self-explanatory)

I will try to complete the review quickly, but a long piece will obviously take me a longer amount of time. x3
If you have any questions feel free to contact me!
I look forward to helping you hone your craft. :o
Last edited by Sura on Tue Feb 08, 2011 6:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hi, Sura!

I'm guessing that I have to tell you which type of review I want..? I guess I'll go with Harsh Standard. 8D I need someone to tell me my story is bad if it is... XD

Here's the link to the first chapter. viewtopic.php?t=75709 Thank you~!

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Done!
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Hi there! Nice to meet you, Sura. :)

I'd love if you'd review my work in the Photography section, you can do it in any way that you feel like. I would really appreciate it. :)

Here's the link: topic75834.html

Thank you in advance! ^_^

~Gryph
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Done!
Thanks for posting Gryph. n_n
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