I Can't Come Up With A Catchy Name :( (Accepting)

This is one way of doing things. I'll review for a small fee of $9.98 US. Joking. That's no fun. Free reviews. Conditions:

Will Not Review
Novels
Some short stories
Twilight under any circumstances
If anything else, will be informed

-Only review most short stories and some novels under certain circumstances.

-Will review any rated work (Unless topics have said will not review)

-Reviews at writer's own risk.

-Cannot be blamed for any loss of hair or deaths of cats (fish may be my fault)

Here is the second chapter of a novel I'm writing.

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A note is that you DO NOT need to read the first chapter because every chapter it will switch between two characters. Thus this chapter is completely unrelated, as of now, to the first chapter. If you plan on reading future chapters than it will make much more sense if you read the first one.

Hey Day. I did a review on the chapter, but it may not be that great. I don't usually review novels.

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