Critiques from a Freyja! (Open again, yo.)

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Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks a bunch!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality