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Poor Imp · 2008-05-20T22:53:27Z

University classes winding down and such. And I've dead-ditched any intent to take classes over the summer. ^^ ...meaning I've a slight bit of time. Anyhow, if you're poor in critiques--or poor in considered ones--ask here, da? For precision's sake, and with Madmoiselle Suzanne's advice in mind: The Imp Critiques... Er, anything. Though I'm rather fond of Science Fiction and well-grounded fantasy. UPDATE [ 31 Jan. 2010 ] ...Oy, after a bout with Death, I'm making a dash at living. Which means writing. ^_^ And reviewing. That's all then. IMP

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Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:52 pm

Poor Imp says... · Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:52 pm

'Course, Jared. ^_^

Raimunda-- Er, have you got anything you'd like critiqued specifically?

IMP

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Wed Jun 11, 2008 2:26 am

JFW1415 says... · Wed Jun 11, 2008 2:26 am

Hello! I'd love some help on Suicide Kills Us All. Mind taking a look?

Thanks!

~JFW1415

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Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:59 pm

LoveableLittleSock says... · Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:59 pm

Hola! If you could rip this to shreds, please do so. And don't comment on the vampire ending and how cliche it is - I've come to that realization as soon as the words flew from my fingers.

Alliteration!

I have my English Final on Wednesday. FUN. Anyway, it's an entry for the contest JFW is holding, and she extended it... so I have more time. Whoo - hoo! So, will you critique? I have cookies.

Ickle link-ikins:

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Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:59 am

Poor Imp says... · Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:59 am

Er, mostly back. See edited first message.

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"There is adventure in simply being among those we love, and among the things we love -- and beauty, too."

-Lloyd Alexander

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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:28 am

DreamyAlice says... · Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:28 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More

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