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Hi,

I have just posted the first chapter for my book the Descendant. I would like reviews please, either fair or harsh but constructive. I'm specifying it although I don't need to; you guys are great.

In return, I would love to review other writers' work, just pm me to let me know.

Thank you and I hope you enjoy the chapter

Tanya

P.S was I suppose to post a link to it directly or something? If yes, I don't know how but you can find it through my name, right?




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OK, Tanya, I had the same problem as you a few days ago! So here is the link to the topic thread that tells you how to do this sort of thing: Links Hope this helps! :D
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
--Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134

Do you need a review?




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