"For what are we if not defined by words?" || CLOSED!

Hannah · 2009-02-09T04:18:56Z

Closed for now, please! ^_^ Hello! I'm Hannah! It's a pleasure to meet you, and I'm sure we'll be seeing a lot more of each other now that we're acquainted. I'm 18, and all my life I've wanted to be a writer. Well, I know I'm not there yet, because as someone once said, "You're not a real writer until you've gotten your first rejection letter". Anywhoodles! You're not here to hear my life story, are you? Let's get down to it then. C: Will Review {and be quite good at}; * Poetry * Action/Adventure Fiction * Fantasy Fiction * Romantic Fiction * Other Fiction Will Review {and be relatively good at}; * Historical Fiction {though I can't check facts specifically} * Science Fiction {some of it might be lost on me, though I enjoy reading it!} * Lyrics Will Review {and be okay at}; * Scripts {I don't have much experience with scripts!} * Non-Fiction {can't check facts, mostly structure} Will NOT Review; * Fan-Fiction * Art and Photography Got it? Good. Really, I'm willing to try my hand at critiquing anything! I mean, I'm not an expert on poetry or historical fiction, but I can still read and comprehend plots, imagery, and characters! ^_^ How I Will Review; So, what can you expect with a review from me? Well, let's see. Sometimes, especially with poetry, I might slip into focusing on the structure, like I did here . Sometimes I focus on the tone of the piece and how specific words or phrases detract or add to the work, like I did here . A lot of times I'll tell you to clarify things in the story or to take out explanations you don't even need, like I did here . Sometimes the reviews are long , and sometimes they're short . Really, I don't have a set way of reviewing -- you'll get what comes to my mind when I'm reading. IF , however, there is an element of your work that you want me to look at specifically, please just let me know and I'll do my best to oblige! ^_^ Also, don't feel ashamed to post anything rated R! A lot of my works are rated R and I know I question whether or not to ask for a review, but you shouldn't worry about that -- I am prepared to handle anything you might have posted. C: I don't require anything in return, but it would be nice if you might respond through PM whether my critique was helpful or not. ^_^ Heummm, and of course I'll try to get every review done as quickly as possible. If it looks like I abandoned the thread {accidentally}, feel free to poke me through my guest book or PM to get back here. =] Oh, now here are the rules on how to ask for a review! 1. Please ask for one review at a time. If I finish reviewing one of your pieces, you can come back and ask about another, but please wait until I have finished your first! 2. Should you ask for a review on a piece that is part of a series and not the beginning of that series, please let me know what went on before or you'll have a very flustered Hannah on your hands! 3. Please post the name of your work, the genre of your work, and the link to your work when requesting a review. Be sure to include anything specific you want me to work on AND if there's anything special I should know before plunging in. Well, I suppose that's about it. ^_^;; Happy posting, everyone~

Galerius

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Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:40 pm

Galerius says... · Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:40 pm

Name: Sol Invictus on Trial

Genre: Poetry? Oh wait, Dramatic Poetry.

Link: topic51036.html

Thanks.

Don't eat me.

200397

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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:25 am

200397 says... · Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:25 am

Title: Vindicated

Genre: Other Fiction/Horror

Link: topic51045.html

Rating: PG-13

I don't usually write horror, but this is for a vampire contest, and it needs help. The deadline's August 20, so take your time.

~Sunny

playerj09

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Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:02 am

playerj09 says... · Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:02 am

Title: Zombies on the roof.

Genre: fantasy

link: post583609.html#583609

Thanks

"my job was twofold 1)save lives 2)take lives. Not necessarily in that order."

Waterlilygirl

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Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:15 am

Waterlilygirl says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:15 am

Hi can you please have a look at this one? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=60191
It hasn't got a name yet as I've only just started writing this off the top of my head... its Fiction - Other

JUST SMILE

DreamyAlice

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Tue Jun 13, 2023 10:56 am

DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 13, 2023 10:56 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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