Force me to review please

I find that I need a reason to review, i look at all the works and I don't know what to review. So I'd like your help, so I can up my review count. If you post then I'll have a direction.

I will do anything but poetry( sorry not my thing)

I will give a detailed review on any fiction piece. Fantasy, Science, Historical, Other, Romance. Like I said anything but poetry.

I focus on Characterization, Plot and dialogue mostly, but of course will comment on other things. Those are just my specialties.


So post the link below and I will will get it done within 24 hours of post. I say this because I don't think people like me and probably will only give me a few reviews. If I'm wrong then the time may be extended.

Up to four works in a single post. So please give me stuff to review

Hi, could you review my fantasy story? It's called Redmont from Tranview.

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Done

Hey could you look at something I just posted
Principal
about 1500 words.
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Thanks a ton.
If I like your review I'll ask you to review everything else I write.

Done Next please

Wow. That review was not what I expected; but you did a great, great job. Want some more?
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Scarecrow, a little over fifteen hundred words.
And there will be semi-colon abuse and more "SAT words"
It's kind of my thing.

Done

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