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PhoenixBishop
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:13 am
PhoenixBishop says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:13 am
I'd like to up my review count and increase my editing skills. I want to stress that if it's fantasy or science fiction you will get a much more detailed review. I don't review scripts,or poetry. Everything else is fair game. Depending on the length I should be able to get to you in that day.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~




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PatriciaTina
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:45 am
PatriciaTina says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:45 am
Hi! I was wondering if I could get a review. The link is: topic44042.html. It's for school, and I really need tips on how to improve it. Thank you so so much!




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PhoenixBishop
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:12 am
PhoenixBishop says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:12 am
Yeah my first requested review is done. This is fun Keep them coming.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~




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PatriciaTina
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Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:00 am
PatriciaTina says... · Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:00 am
Hi again. I just finished editing that part, and I would really appreciate it if you could review my edited version. Here's the link: topic44125.html.

Thank you thank you thank you so so much in advance! :D
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler
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PhoenixBishop
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Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:58 pm
PhoenixBishop says... · Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:58 pm
So you have wished it. Now it is done
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~




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PatriciaTina
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 1:14 am
PatriciaTina says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 1:14 am
Hi :D I got another story here. This time it's a fantasy about ghosts! :lol: Can you please review it? Very much appreciated! Here's the link: topic44217.html. Thanks also for all your other reviews on my stories. They really helped me! :D
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson




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PhoenixBishop
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:08 pm
PhoenixBishop says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:08 pm
It is done.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

Death~




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DreamyAlice
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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:56 am
DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:56 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein