Is your story in full bloom?

Do you need a review? I'll be happy to help!

I REVIEW
Other Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Fantasy
Science-Fiction
Action/Adventure Fiction

But I'm willing to look at other things. I'm not too good with poetry, but I'll give it a shot if you really want my help. I'm also not good at historical fiction or fan fiction stuff either, but I'll try if you really want me to (but there are no guarantees that I can help). Please, don't post a continuation of something. I don't think I can review the twenty-sixth installment of your story! I prefer to start at the beginning and then move with the story.

I can help with plot, characters, setting, grammar and imagery if I see problems. I'll try to get to your stories as quickly as possible, and hopefully I'll have a second star soon. So post away!

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Just post the link to your story here, and tell me if you have anything specific in mind you want me to help you with.

Would you mind taking a look at my short story?
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It's Other Fiction and short-ish, and it needs a lot of work--I've edited it, but it's still...eh.
Thank you!

Of course I will. I had just asked you if you wanted something to be reviewed. Haha.

EDIT: Review posted!

Hey! Could you review this for you. It's in other fiction and it's pretty short. Feel free to skim through the prologue to know what's going on. It's pretty short so...

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Review posted!

I actually reviewed your story before you posted. I hope I helped you!

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