Pick me! Pick me!

Hey people!
I just finished my novel, Untouched!!! (Awaiting points to post the rest)
I have way to much free time on my hands so now it’s time to do some intense reviewing.

What I will Critique
-Basically anything with vampires!!!
-Romance
-Any types of Fiction are always welcome and fun!!
-Historical Fiction
-*Of course multiple chapters

*Before you request, reread your writing. Sure, you may skip things, but always proofread before posting!!!


** I am best at finding holes in writing. For example, you say your MC is holding a glass full of water and then she does a back flip…Where did the water go?
----Obviously, that is a lame example.

Anyways, just post me a link and I’ll get to is as soon as I can.

--Jazz

Oh yay! First reply!

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would you mind?

Thanks jasmine

WOOO HOOO My first reply!!!

YAY!

Read and reviewed.

C'mon people. I can take on more than one!!!!

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