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*Poke* Just so you know, Out of Focus has been strongly edited, so I'd LOVE a critique on that one. *Points to post up above* Anyways, the rest have been taken off while I edit, so if you haven't read them yet, just forget about them. XD

And let me know when I can return the favor! (And go apply to be an Instructor! PSHH. You write AMAZING critiques. There's a reason I always come to you.)

~JFW1415




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hi this is ryan......i am 19 yrs old n simply love to pen down poems......
i feel this is a great site that enables budding writers.....
i feel amazing to be a part ........




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