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Maybe
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:46 am
Maybe says... · Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:46 am
Open for requests!

I will Critique:

Fantasy
Sci/Fi
Historical Fiction
Romance
Action/Adventure
Other Fiction
Scripts
Art/Photography

I will not critique:

Poetry
Lyrics
Non-Fiction
Fanfiction

What I focus on:

Character Development
Dialog
Word Choice
Overall Flow
Sentence Structure
Grammar

Send me the title of the piece you want reviewed, as well as a link to that piece and I'll get it done Asap. Thanks!

Completed:

TL G-Wooster - A Fool's Hope, Chapter 7
Medusa - Fragments of Indulgence
Spazztardchild - The Scient Witch, Chapter 1 Part 1

-May
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Twit
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 4:57 pm
Twit says... · Tue Jul 01, 2008 4:57 pm
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"A Fool's Hope", Fantasy. It's on its seventh chapter there, so if you can't get all of them done, can you just do the last? Please? For I come bearing gifts...

*presses button on remote control*

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Medusa
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:46 pm
Medusa says... · Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:46 pm
Hi! I know I've been asking everyone, but second opinions are the best... will you please critique either my Dawn With Fox or my Fragments of Indulgence on my Featured Works? Gracias.

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Wed Jul 02, 2008 1:53 am
Maybe says... · Wed Jul 02, 2008 1:53 am
Done, Twit.

Medusa, I'll start on yours tomorrow (July 2). I don't have time tonight.

-May
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Spazztardchild
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Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:13 pm
Spazztardchild says... · Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:13 pm
Can you please review The Scient Witch?

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There is also a prologue but you don't have to do anything for that :)

Thanks!
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:13 am
Maybe says... · Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:13 am
Done Medusa and Spazztard. I enjoyed both of your pieces. :)

-May
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Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:25 pm
ProfessorRabbit says... · Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:25 pm
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Purdy please? :)
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Thu Mar 30, 2023 4:02 pm
DreamyAlice says... · Thu Mar 30, 2023 4:02 pm
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