Lets do this NaPo thing. Only last month I didn't have the faintest idea that Poetry is the most beautiful way to express emotions. Its dreamy, its nostalgic, its thoughtful, its just simply beautiful. I am actually grateful to my exams who introduced me to poetry(EsCaPades). I am an amateur willing to learnThats a bold assumption Awru Also I thought it will be fun to have a themenot like I have the audacity to follow it asdfghjkl. So I decided on Rain. Why you ask cuz I like rain. Its fun and pretty and dreamy. The theme has to be*coughcough* flexible so I think I will also add other aspects of weather like sun, wind thats all I can think of right now ecetra
Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Thanks @Liberty <33 This is going to my first NaPo poem Whooppp! I decided to get fancyy. The attachment is blur. So click on it if anyone wants to read it.
NaPo Poem: 1
"Drowning In the Rain"
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Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Ooh, I love your poems are fantastic! I especially like the first one. You use very interesting words that knit together very well. And the little pictures in the corner add a nice touch to your poems. Keep it up! I'll be keeping up with your thread.
Aww! Thanks @Liberty So I ended up writing the 2nd part of the above poem. It just had this incomplete feeling to it. I felt like I just haavvee to give the whole story! Also I was feeling kinda romantic and sadistic. I hate myself
NaPo Poem: 3
"Its Raining Again" 2
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Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Awru, that last poem has really fascinating formatting, from the punctuation to the alignment - I like seeing the more experimental side to your poetry! (Your author note about the last one not being very "poemy" made me laugh -> that's exactly the type of poem I like to read!!) Also I really dig the visuals you're choosing to compliment your poems. Well done!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better. — Anne Lamott
