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Karzkin · 2012-06-02T12:48:10Z

Y'all know the drill. The Rules 1. Poetry only 2. I tell it like it is, yo. 3. I play the saxophone a lot. You may have to wait a little. Or a lot. Or indefinitely.

fukase

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Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:53 am

fukase says... · Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:53 am

Yay! You're up to business.

Can you review this?

I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)

Karzkin

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Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:21 am

Karzkin says... · Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:21 am

Memo done.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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felistia

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Thu Jan 21, 2016 12:35 pm

felistia says... · Thu Jan 21, 2016 12:35 pm

Hi.

I would really love if you could review my serpent of the sands poem part 1,2,3,4,5 and six please.

part 1 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-1-125597
part 2 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-2-125615
part 3 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-3-125675
part 4 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-Part-4-125725
part 5 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-5-125848
part 6 https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-6-125849

Thanks for your time.

I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

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