Dreamworx's Reviews

I'm trying to build up my presence again on youngwriterssociety. Things have changed a lot since I last signed on. I would love to offer my thoughts on new pieces.

- I will read novel chapters, fan fiction, short stories, screenplays, poems, song lyrics, and creative nonfiction.

- Personal preference: YA, fantasy, romance, and paranormal fiction.

- Will prioritize pieces that don't have a lot of reviews yet.

The bait: I'm a published writer with editing experience and I give excellent reviews!!!

(P.S. Slightly off topic, but I'm interested in having a "critiquing buddy" to regularly exchange reviews with. Message me if you're interested!)

@Dreamworx95

Hiya! I have a short story, His Dirty Deed.
It's rated as 18+ for sexual violence.
Let me know if you can review it. If you can, I'd like you to focus on description and characterisation.
Many thanks!

ArtStyx, I've reviewed your story.

Hi! I've been working on this serialized story and I would really appreciate a review, specifically on chapters 5, 6, and 7 (which will be uploaded tonight). I have been told that the first few chapters are slow, which is something that I'm working to fix in later drafts!
Link: profile/jumpingsheep/portfolio
The story is titled "Lone Voice Radio".
Thank you!

I would very much appreciate a review of my fantasy/myth "Norse Creation Narrative" https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/EmmVeePi/Norse-Creation-Narrative-122887 It is the first step in my dream of retelling Norse mythology in a modern engaging way. Thank you for the interest.