Will review for soup and curry

Hi there! Nerd Bird here!
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the beginning of my first novel The Shifties!

You can find the first two chapters here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/NerdBird/portfolio/462161

Cant wait to read your feedback!

All that needs to be done up to this point has been done

Hi Isha! Thanks a lot for reviewing my previous story. I would be glad if you review my short story, 'A Godly Affair'. It has received 5 reviews so far, but most of them are nitpicks on grammar. I request you to tell me about plot, narration and other aspects of the story which I can improve. Thanks!
A Godly Affair

Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story

Deciding to Die

I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...

@guineapiggirl
@Gaurav009

Done and done!

Hey Isha, I have a few poems that haven't gotten much attention. I could really use feedback, though. I'll leave you with options and let you pick

No Reviews
Title

The stars, dirt and dark

When the Robins lift

One review

Godly

Whatever interests you! Thanks.

@rhiasofia
Done!

Hello Isha, thanks a lot for your reviews. I have written the first chaper of my novel, which is an adaptation of my first short story (which you had review). I am facing some grammar issues and haven't got any review. I would also like to know whether I should continue writing it. And something about the plot. Hope you have a look at it.
The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1

Hi! Do you think you could possibly review my Introishthing to my novel? It's pretty short, but it's my first story, so I'd really like some feedback.

The House of Sand-- Introduction
Here it is, if you feel so inclined as to review it for me.

I should be posting the next bit later today.