Periods, semicolons, and dashes

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I think you're confused about dashes, semicolons, and those periods (...).

Periods indicate a trailing off.

"I don't think that's a good idea..."

"Hush!"


Semicolons indicates a dramatic pause, which is later finished.

"This is not a good idea; it will lead us into danger."

"Hush!"


Dashes indicate an abrupt cutting off.

"I don't think --"

"Hush!"


What's the difference between the dash and the periods? With dashes, you cut off the sentence before it is complete. With periods, you use them to indicate a cliffhanger sentence. It's still complete grammatically, but the idea isn't.

This also should only be used in dialogue, unless you're writing in first person, which is a little less strict.
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Aren't "those periods" called ellipsis?




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They are.

I torment my friends with my knowledge of that. They say, "and those little dot dot dot things" and I get to blurt out, "Ellipses!" Fun stuff.
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LOL! Well, unlike you two, I call them DOT-DOT-DOTs.

It's really funny. My best friend overuses them in her stories, so I do critiquing and reading over the phone, and I say "They went to the grocery store... DOT-DOT-DOT." Really loud too so it's embarrassing but funny. :)

Okay... I shall remember that to impress.... *tries to remember*
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Very informative.

That's what happens when Stinkoman teaches grammar.

Stinkoman 20X6 wrote: (...) "DOT DOT DOT!"


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Griffinkeeper wrote:Very informative.

That's what happens when Stinkoman teaches grammar.

Stinkoman 20X6 wrote: (...) "DOT DOT DOT!"


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Snoink wrote:Okay... I shall remember that to impress.... *tries to remember*


Are those dot-dot-dots used correctly after that "Okay"?
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I have a friend who just does two dots..
Gah! It makes me wanna scream at him.

I usually over do it when I'm just talking (via typing) though.......... << example
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