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This is my prologue to my new story (more like a long novel) I'm working on. Enjoy! Prologue: An Un…Fri Mar 31, 2006 6:31 pm -
i edited it hopefully and added some filler, I hope it's enough :) constructive criticism please =]…Mon Mar 27, 2006 9:35 pm -
This is the beginning of a novel about rich kids in Silicon Valley. It's told from five perspective…Mon Mar 27, 2006 8:11 am -
Why Ch. 7-9 (REWRITE) Joe stood frozen in his place, staring at the man with the gun. He had now co…Sun Mar 12, 2006 7:33 am -
Chapter 1. There is a place. In this place horrors roam free, screams go unheard, and a battle for …Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:02 am -
Molly drove silently in the night, headed towards the small grocery store near the park. Her mind w…Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:56 pm -
PART 1: "I'll be home late so why don't you eat a sandwich" the voice on the other side of the phon…Fri Mar 10, 2006 4:51 am -
The white ball began to glow very bright, and the haze was forcibly drawn to it. "Then let us go," …Sun Mar 05, 2006 8:52 pm -
Ok, I've never been ookin on a story after the first chapter, so I mine as well give you part 2....…Sat Mar 04, 2006 11:17 pm -
A blue mustang pulled up into the driveway of a two story house with a biege roof. A woman inside w…Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:41 pm -
Tony was taking a nice drive in his car. Well, nice may not be the word. Maybe there are no words f…Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:16 pm -
Today I felt like buying a game. I was bored with the one I was playing now that was called "EXTREM…Tue Feb 28, 2006 9:52 pm -
So I was walking down the sidewalk(like every american does, well im not sure) and I spotted someon…Tue Feb 28, 2006 9:48 pm -
The cashier silently looked at Joe as he dialed the number on the phone. There was high tension in …Tue Feb 28, 2006 4:22 am -
This is the second installment of my story about Jess. Although I have spent hours on this peice I …Mon Feb 27, 2006 11:24 pm -
I wasn't quite sure where to put this post. You see this story is based very closely on true events…Sun Feb 26, 2006 8:33 pm -
Joe nodded his head again. "But," he said as calmly as he could, "I need to get something from the …Thu Feb 23, 2006 8:35 pm -
Joe stood frozen in his place, staring at the man with the gun. He had now concluded that his day h…Mon Feb 20, 2006 6:23 am -
Faded Future The future. It is a time that most people hope to be a place of Peace, of Truth, of Tr…Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:18 am -
Joe and Max were now headed towards a small grocery store at the other side of the street, and were…Sun Feb 19, 2006 7:03 am -
Locked Shadow (1, 2 and 3)Chapter 1. He could smell the fear on the child, from his vantage point on the roof, as it walked d…Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:25 pm -
“Why” Part one (ch.1-5) Ch.1 Nothing. There was absolutely nothing- a vast and unending void, so st…Thu Feb 16, 2006 5:26 am -
[pre]Chapter 1.[/pre] [pre]He could smell the fear on the child, from his vantage point on the roof…Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:48 am -
Kneeling next to Max, Joe had to figure out what he was going to do. This kid must have a mom or da…Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:34 am -
Joe picked up his bat and began trudging across the wet grass to find his baseball. Usually, Joe wo…Mon Feb 13, 2006 12:06 am -
Max had just stepped through the door, and was now spiraling down through white light, being blinde…Sun Feb 12, 2006 2:11 pm -
Nothing. There was absolutely nothing- a vast and unending void, so still with no noise and nothing…Sat Feb 11, 2006 4:46 am -
warning: extremly wierd and bizarre! I broke it into chapters i recomend reading one a day or at a …Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:56 am -
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translated these... from french, so it sounds a bit off but ya...wee... Chapter 1 Manon is very hap…Tue Jan 03, 2006 5:25 am -
Sitting on my bed was killing me. I got up, went to the bathroom and yanked on a pair of converse b…Sat Dec 17, 2005 10:00 pm -
(Editing) Sorry.Tue Dec 13, 2005 3:14 pm -
‘ Hey Kelly, can you get me a dohnut from the canteen? I have to go and speak to Miss brown really …Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:15 am -
10am Emily had vowed to get the class as a whole, she had survived the holidays living off the idea…Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:42 am -
It was English Lit, never the most exciting lesson, but never the worst. The note was on the orange…Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:42 pm -
This is the first chapter of a book I've been working on, I'd really like some help with it! 9am Em…Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:54 pm -
Well, heres my atempt at somthing resembling a story! Once upon a time, there was a land so thick w…Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:28 am -
Disclaimer: I do not own any of J.K. Rowling’s original character, including that of Draco Malfoy… …Fri Nov 18, 2005 10:23 am -
The night was fine and clear, as a certain lanky, ‘vacant-faced youth’ sat watching a group of teen…Fri Nov 04, 2005 7:56 am -
Angelina Peters walked amongst her friends, chatting and giggling as they headed toward the public …Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:00 am -
The wind blew madly. The horizon had dimmed and taken on a shade of grey so terribly threatening th…Thu Oct 27, 2005 5:43 pm -
Chapter four. Koani counted the days as they went by, untill sunless day melted into moonless night…Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:51 am -
Locked prologue to another story /PDeleted.Mon Oct 24, 2005 7:17 am -
Chaptah three. Ropu was a tough teacher. He made Koani work until she was exhausted lifting weights…Sat Oct 22, 2005 10:41 pm -
warning: extremly wierd and bizarre! I broke it into chapters i recomend reading one a day or at a …Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:17 pm -
I have a time limit so I don't know how much I'll be able to post. But this is my new project. enjo…Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:52 am -
I want to thank Noxious for that wonderful informative review. The reason that that draft was so ba…Wed Oct 19, 2005 3:09 pm -
My apoligies guys, to save my writing I usually used my email but it's being maniacal...ergg...so I…Wed Oct 19, 2005 11:58 am -
He wandered across the road, undecided as to where he would go. The hospital flashed through his mi…Tue Oct 18, 2005 11:11 pm -
Something I've been writing to get rid of my writing block recently...'bout a group of friends who …Tue Oct 18, 2005 11:09 pm
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