Community Poetry Journal

Community Poetry Journal

A collaborative journal for poetry YWS-ers have read!

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  • alliyah Admin
    My sister recently shared this poem with me "Valentine for Ernest Mann" by Naomi Shihab Nye. source
    Valentine for Ernest Mann by Naomi Shihab Nye
    You can’t order a poem like you order a taco.
    Walk up to the counter, say, “I’ll take two”
    and expect it to be handed back to you
    on a shiny plate.

    Still, I like your spirit.
    Anyone who says, “Here’s my address,
    write me a poem,” deserves something in reply.
    So I’ll tell a secret instead:
    poems hide. In the bottoms of our shoes,
    they are sleeping. They are the shadows
    drifting across our ceilings the moment
    before we wake up. What we have to do
    is live in a way that lets us find them.

    Once I knew a man who gave his wife
    two skunks for a valentine.
    He couldn’t understand why she was crying.
    “I thought they had such beautiful eyes.”
    And he was serious. He was a serious man
    who lived in a serious way. Nothing was ugly
    just because the world said so. He really
    liked those skunks. So, he re-invented them
    as valentines and they became beautiful.
    At least, to him. And the poems that had been hiding
    in the eyes of skunks for centuries
    crawled out and curled up at his feet.

    Maybe if we re-invent whatever our lives give us
    we find poems. Check your garage, the odd sock
    in your drawer, the person you almost like, but not quite.
    And let me know.


    I really enjoy this take on just what poetry "is". This line is probably my favorite from the poem, "What we have to do
    is live in a way that lets us find them."
    ... it's just interesting to consider how someone might live to find more poetry. Also reminds me a little bit of a poem I wrote 2 years ago for NaPo poetry in plain sight which is also about finding poetry in the unexpected but ordinary.

    Have you tried to write a poem about "what" poetry is? It seems like a fairly common poetic topic for a poet to consider and write about. What were your thoughts about the poem? :)

    Liminality replied · Jun 22, 2022

    Okay this is kind of random, but I like how they write "He was a serious man", and the meaning of 'Ernest' is 'serious, earnest', and 'Mann' is just 'man' in German. Not sure if that was the intention, but that's how I read it. I like the line breaks and the voice in the poem, like they're addressing this note to the poem-requester. It's very charming. I also like the word for poems which are about what poetry is -- 'ars poetica'. Thanks for sharing, alliyah! :D



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