Ghosted

Ghosted

A club for my current WIP/novel!

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    Ghosted Club Update · May 4, 2021
    I popped this blurb over in the thread, too, but I wanted to share a new, much shorter description of this story.

    (I may or may not have been inspired by getting into writer twitter more. >>)

    Here's the new and improved blurb!~

    What happens after you die? After seeing ghosts his entire life, Van Sullivan thought he knew the answer. But when he's killed in a car accident shortly after returning to his childhood town, Van doesn't become a ghost. Instead, he ends up on a strange, magical world. To make things worse? He's supposed to be this world's new chosen one.

    Armed with a strange power, an amnesiac ghost named Temp, and his ex-best friend's boyfriend Theo, Van has to track down his missing god and deal with his creepy cult. But throughout it all, there's one question he's dying to know: why would anyone want a god that abandoned them for twenty years?

    LilPWilly replied · Jun 2, 2021

    That’s a really good blurb lol only one suggestion: maybe change it to ‘a missing god’ and ‘a creepy cult’? I left this story for a while, but just from this post, I’m definitely going to get back into it.


    Mageheart replied · Jun 2, 2021

    That's a good suggestion! I'll edit that sentence so it's a little clearer to read.

    And I'm glad this blurb was good enough to make you reinvested in the story! I hope you're not disappointed once you catch up. c:


    LilPWilly replied · Jun 2, 2021

    Done lol
    It’s good



I'll show my defiance through ironic obedience!
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