Ghosted

Ghosted

A club for my current WIP/novel!

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    Ghosted Club Update · May 4, 2021
    I popped this blurb over in the thread, too, but I wanted to share a new, much shorter description of this story.

    (I may or may not have been inspired by getting into writer twitter more. >>)

    Here's the new and improved blurb!~

    What happens after you die? After seeing ghosts his entire life, Van Sullivan thought he knew the answer. But when he's killed in a car accident shortly after returning to his childhood town, Van doesn't become a ghost. Instead, he ends up on a strange, magical world. To make things worse? He's supposed to be this world's new chosen one.

    Armed with a strange power, an amnesiac ghost named Temp, and his ex-best friend's boyfriend Theo, Van has to track down his missing god and deal with his creepy cult. But throughout it all, there's one question he's dying to know: why would anyone want a god that abandoned them for twenty years?

    LilPWilly replied · Jun 2, 2021

    That’s a really good blurb lol only one suggestion: maybe change it to ‘a missing god’ and ‘a creepy cult’? I left this story for a while, but just from this post, I’m definitely going to get back into it.


    Mageheart replied · Jun 2, 2021

    That's a good suggestion! I'll edit that sentence so it's a little clearer to read.

    And I'm glad this blurb was good enough to make you reinvested in the story! I hope you're not disappointed once you catch up. c:


    LilPWilly replied · Jun 2, 2021

    Done lol
    It’s good



You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott