Hi, Jabber.
*flutters eyelashes*
Chapter 1, possibly? topic39577.html I am very much obliged.
Sarah
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Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
I'd love this one critiqued. Only one person commented on it so far, probably because I couldn't think of a decent title for it since it's part of something else, but I would love a review!!
So. Umm. I have this strange little piece, yes? For Cal's contest. I tried writing it in a style I've never really experimented with before, and I really would love an opinion on whether it worked or not?
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