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Hey Tanya!

If you're not too busy, would you mind taking a look at this for me? It's flash fiction, and I need to make it less confusing (only about 800 words).

Thanks!

Lupis

Hey there, Momsie!

I know you're a bit busy with those other reviews, so whenever you get time, could you like review part 1 and part 3 of my novel Turning the Tables? You've read the part-2 already, so it's upto you, but I don't need a review for that, so as you wish!

Here's the link for the two:
Turning the Tables(1.1)
Turning the Tables(1.3)

Please and thanks!

P.S. I'll review your piece by tomorrow!

Hey Mum!! (: I have started a new work in fantasy fiction. Little Macey. Don't be too mad at Tooth, he tried his best, but I just HAD to write this... (: I would very much like it if you took a look. Thank you, Mum!

Kafka, Lupis, Shubhi and Emma: done!

I was wondering, if you had time would you mind reviewing this? I did some big editing and would love to know if its an improvement at all. Thank you much for doing these!

Hello!

I was wondering if you would could possibly perhaps review this: topic76997.html

Pretty pwease and muchas gracias!
-Once

Tayler, Once, done!

May you be so kind as to review my new entry.
topic77210.html
It's in general fiction.
Greatly appreciated!
Thanks!
-Jojo

I'd just love it if you could review this. Thanka.

Woohoo! New excerpt!! topic77919.html#p835897

You're a candle, burning for our own good. Strange thing is that your wax is never over, girl. -.- Lol

Well if you have the time I'd appreciate you looking at this http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=77898

Thanks

Hey there!

I've seen some of your reviews around the forums and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at something for me. It's called 'Sometimes' and it's in romance novels. It's my first attempt at writing romance as a genre, not just a sub-plot, and I'd like to know what you think of it.

I would really appreciate your help if you have the time

viewtopic.php?t=77741 - the link to chapter one.

Thanks!

Jojo, Kafka, Gheala, Icy and Dudette: Done! THanks for the great reads!

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Hey. Im new to the site was hoping you could help review some of my works and give me a few ideas. I don't mind if u be harsh, because at the end of the day I just wish to improve and be the best I can be. I would like u to review my short story The Whispering Tower. Topic:78038. Thanks alot this would be really apreciated.
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