Hey skins! I got the fifth chapter of my romance novel up. Would you be so kind as to review it for me? Your other reviews were very helpful. Here is the link:
Yes, thanks for the review. I fixed most of the things you pointed out (though there were a couple I disagreed with). Thanks so much though.
Umm.. also in the thread (in a spoiler at the top of the page) is also the chapter preceding the one you reviewed. Can you take a look at that one as well?
It's a love story that was supposed to be for Elinor Brynn's winter love contest but I was err...a little late . If you could review it, I will send you a cookie! Thankies!
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Would you do the review for a Non-Fiction piece titled Just 1411 left I have written this for my school magazine and I need a quick reviews if that's possible. Thanks in advance.
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