Young Writers Society

Hello everyone!

March is National Peanut Month! So come get your share of Peanut!

I review anything and everything

Just so you know what type of review you're looking at, I specialize in;

~Grammar
~Plot and character development
~Word choice and sentence structure
~Detecting unneeded cliches
~Honest and truthful critiques


Here is an example of one of my reviews for your reference!

Drop me a line, and I'll get to you within twenty-four hours!

P.S. I work for free!

~Peanut

Well, since no body has asked you for a review yet, I will!!

Hemlock

Just a general review would do though! Pwease and tanks you!

Finite!

Bring on some more!

Hey, I was wondering if you'd check out my fantasy novel, The Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. i have ch.1 pt. 1 and 2 post and ch.2 pt 1. You don't have to look at them all, just the first part. Here's a link to the first one. If you can find the time:
topic58817.html

Thanks.

Finished!

More, please! You know you want to

hey can you review this from Historical Fiction. Please also go though Chapter-1 as many haven't.
Finding me back- prologue
Finding me back-Chapter 1


And let me know if I can review something for you.

I finished the prologue yesterday, sorry I haven't gotten to the first chapter today. I've been very busy lately.. again, I apologize. I'll get to it shortly

~Peanut

Please review my story, Shades of Violet. It's pretty cool. I hope you enjoy it. :

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Thanks so much!

Finished with yours, Valentine! I loved it

Sorry Shubhi, but your Chapter 1 is a locked topic. I can't review it. I'm sorry D=

Anyone else want a peanut? =D

Mememe, Peanut! I want one of your lurverly reviews!

Be warned that it is long, so sorry. Genre: Fantasy Fiction, First Chapter. Don't worry, I won't chase you down and set the hounds of hell on you if you don't follow it! Heck, I'll even hide it from you O.o no-more-than-the-first-chapteraphobia!

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Thanks!

I must say, peanuts are my favorite nut....

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60146.html

thankee kindly.

Finished!

Next? =D

Do you want to review my story? It's fantasy fiction.
Well, not the whole story. Chapter one, part one.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60214.html

Just finished with your story, bubblegum (:

Hi peanut. Can you review this for me?

Survive Chaper One