It's scifi/fantasy. This is just part one because this is one heck of a long prologue. I don't know why, I was writing and suddenly it was like this. I still need to fix the other parts =3=
"Good begins with evil, and evil is here to stay." - From The Sovereign
Hello! This thread certainly is popular , I wonder why, eh? (The quality of reviews, obviously) Could you review the first (and if you can, the second too) chapter of this: work.php?id=94843 for me? It looks a bit 'Austen' at the moment but somehow it's going to be science fiction in a few chapters, honest.
Thank you!
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If you're not too busy. The Lottery Winner It's just a short story/the intro to my game design project.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
If it's to your taste, Could you Perhaps take a look at my Futuristic/Trench Warfare/Post-apocalyptic novel in progress. It's Rated 18+ for language and violence so, Just FYI. It's not excessive as far as I can tell, but it is there. work.php?id=94840
Hello, Shearwater, my name is omniyus, and I was wondering if you could review my work. It is a fanfiction of the Hunger Games, so if you don't know the story, than don't bother, but I have three chapters so far.
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