This one's realistic, adventure-ish fiction. It's the first thousand or so words of a short story.
topic41801.html Some of the odd details will be explained later on in the story, so odd details=will make sense later. If you want to read more of it, anyway.
cheers!
--Voxina
It could potentially be entered, after much revision, to the Journal, if people like it. I'm terrible at judging the quality of my own work. But hey, that's what reviews are for, no?
Please let me know if I can return the favor!!!!! Just post in my 'review for food' thread. xD
If you could review this poem, that'd be great but I was also wondering if you do lyrics? If not don't worry, I'm sure someone will review it in time. I'm just impatient. Anyway, here's my poem, Titled Synchronicity: topic42164.html
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?
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